This is some of my best work... tell me what u think, bad more than good
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Critique needed
#1
Posted 17 October 2013 - 06:52 PM
#2
Posted 17 October 2013 - 08:15 PM
The stream and bike shots are cool. The moon photo doesn't do anything for me. Too much negative space..
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#3
Posted 17 October 2013 - 11:34 PM
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#4
Posted 18 October 2013 - 02:44 AM
#5
Posted 18 October 2013 - 09:22 PM
First shot looks good barring a slight horizon tilt.
Second shot is a great composition, but I'm not a fan of the muted colors. It's a good silhouette shot and I think it may look better in mono. The bright light in the center is a tad distracting.
Against what everyone else says, I actually like the 3rd one and its abstract, mural like look. I think the lower right window is too close to the lower edge of the frame, though. I think the transition of the blue colors from dark to light helps negate the look of negative space. The moon is a wee bit tiny and ideally should be larger.
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#6
Posted 21 October 2013 - 04:34 PM
#7
Posted 11 November 2013 - 02:29 PM
Love the Last and the second photo! the stream photo looks just like a painting. great job.
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#8
Posted 12 November 2013 - 08:03 AM
#9
Posted 28 November 2013 - 10:26 AM
The stream and bike shots are cool. The moon photo doesn't do anything for me. Too much negative space..
I agree. Moon shots are very difficult to capture because of how small they turn out if not fully zoomed in or if the moon just happens to appear abnormally large on a given night. In shot #2 I would like to see the yellow brightnened a bit as it appears to mustardy looking imo.
#10
Posted 16 January 2014 - 08:00 PM
i love the stream, and the bicycle one, but the moon one is kind of bleh. i feel like moon shots work better with a really long zoom. maybe shooting in through the clouds to give it a different effect.
#11
Posted 17 January 2014 - 04:00 AM
Unlike the other posters I think #3 is the best and most creative, the first two while being nice shots and well executed are '2 a penny', you will see pictures like those on every photo forum and gallery there is , but #3 shows creative vision, something different, and a pleasing image, good work
Robin
#12
Posted 17 January 2014 - 07:26 AM
#14
Posted 26 January 2014 - 09:59 AM
#15
Posted 26 January 2014 - 10:41 AM
1 and 2 don't do much for me, a bit cliché. 3 is more interesting because it is not contrived or formulaic, but instead shows a bit of your own creative vision.