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rocknrumble

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Here is a shot I took recently that I quite like. What are your thoughts?

 

Wharf Jumping

 



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Hi, I think the shot needed to be taken with you panning to the left more. You would have gotten more of the spectator in view, which would have enhanced the composition, and taken away some wasted space to the right.

Aside from that, it's a nice action/silhouette capture.

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Thanks for that. I agree, though at the time it was a very quick shot so I didn't much time to compose it.



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I think I might have cropped some of the bottom of the image as well , still a good shot 



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Very good shot. I think I would try to crop it to delete from frame head on the left side, part of free space on the wright side and maybe a little part of sea (or ocean) in the bottom. I think it can capture more attention to the jumping guy. Maybe I would to make this photo in black amd white.



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Yes a bit to the left so can see the other guy fully or taking him off. One or the other, very sharp and nice action and the waves add a lot to it :)