Just finished shooting a live modeling art class for a friend CC welcome. d600 24-70 2.8 indoors with 2 reading lights with muslin over them as make do soft boxes
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#1
Posted 23 January 2014 - 11:22 PM
#2
Posted 24 January 2014 - 06:39 AM
Hi, the leaning pose doesn't exactly look comfortable and while the retro black phone can make an interesting prop, especially paired with her vintage hairstyle and outfit, it doesn't seem to have any purpose in this shot. It either needs to be more visible or not there at all. The phone not being on the receiver is also odd, leaving a pointy phone that is more distracting than interesting, being the only thing in the shot other than the model.
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#3
Posted 24 January 2014 - 04:23 PM
I had no control over the pose it was set by the students , the model held each pose for 15 minutes Iwill re edit and see if i can remove the Phone
#4
Posted 24 January 2014 - 06:59 PM
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Posted 24 January 2014 - 10:15 PM
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Posted 25 January 2014 - 07:16 PM
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Posted 26 January 2014 - 09:58 AM
The image around the face is really sharp, but the phone as already mentioned is a distraction. as is what looks like a damp mark on the wall at the corner.Just finished shooting a live modeling art class for a friend CC welcome. d600 24-70 2.8 indoors with 2 reading lights with muslin over them as make do soft boxes