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Just Before… (project in final stage)


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Please comment, correct, critique.

 

 
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Two things, I think the text should be reversed.  Birth on the left, death on the right, like reading a book.  Second, the photo for birth is okay, as in I think there's a bit too much sand already fallen through, but livable.  Death should be an all but run out hour glass with just a little sand on top.

 

Excellent work as always on the photos.



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Thanks brag… it's a work in progress! :P



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The photography and lighting are perfect for what you want to convey.